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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #15 on: December 04, 2006, 12:30:00 AM »
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 Yes. Very Sin City there with an ironic twist.
 The Council will have a lot of fun with that one...
 
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 I'm not much of a player either. Hell, I'm not much of a writer. I just want to have fun. Don't worry about it.                        

 

                                                  

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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #16 on: December 04, 2006, 12:30:00 AM »
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 so are you the council or what? becuase whoever the concil is is the one i take orders from...                        

 

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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #17 on: December 04, 2006, 12:37:00 AM »
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Azrael il Toreador posted:

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 so are you the council or what? becuase whoever the concil is is the one i take orders from...

 
 The Council is composed of NPC's that I'll be controlling. For the most part, that is. They have motives of their own.
 I'll participate too as one of the "peasants" because I like writing stories. Right now I'm weighing my options of recreating my old character because he's been such a labour of love and recycling that material with medium to heavy rewriting since I kind of messed up earlier or just making a new one. It's a matter of the mindset...                        

 

                                                  

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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #18 on: December 04, 2006, 12:42:00 AM »
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 well then im your attack dog then. sort of like the sheriff if this were vtm. that cool?                        

 

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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #19 on: December 04, 2006, 12:58:00 AM »
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 You are Mr. Brown's Vasilyev's Shepherd's and lovely Ms. Priest's attack dog, yes. That would work nicely.                        

 

                                                  

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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #20 on: December 04, 2006, 01:01:00 AM »
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 yay. when do you make the actual thread? i want to open it up with an assassination.                        

 

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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #21 on: December 04, 2006, 01:06:00 AM »
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 I need arathalion to post the character sheet first.
 The first post and those that follow tied to the story will likely be rewrites (I did say I was "moving" the story) of the originals so those won't take long to set up. I'll still have to think about what to write, though. It won't be too long.
                       

 

                                                  

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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #22 on: December 04, 2006, 01:45:00 AM »
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 well, here is something
 
 name: Elizabeth something (whats a good english name)?
 
 gender: f
 
 age: 57
 
 appearance: Elizabeth appears... young... even though she was embraced at 24 people still mistake her for a 17 year old... until they get a close look at her face. not something people normally get to do.she is short and her thick brown hair quite frequently falls out beside her face so you can only see it from in front.
 Elizabeth tends not to dress to impress. she often affects a long black skirt or blue jeans. and several layers of shirts, and probably a jumper or a jacket. her shoes vary.
 
 possessions: Elizabeth lives alone in a large building on the outskirts of the old town, the other side of the old town from the city, in a house that looks like it could collapse at any minute... indeed the outer part could.
 She has craftily reinforced the inner walls and roof of one of the small apartments inside the dilapidated complex. Her actuall living quarters consist of a bathroom, a kitchen, a living room and a couple of bedrooms, one of which she has converted into a kind of study, the other she uses as a bedroom... however, the bathroom is the only room that isnt filled with books.
 for the most part, the house is secure, buy locks and other mundane means... and by superstition on the part of the homeless. no one is ever been scene leaving... The building is believed to be haunted, and everyone that thinks about entering... really doesnt want to. (there should be a better way to say this)
 
 personality: Always quite, Elizabeth isnt a particularly social creature. she does what she needs to do, but doesnt know how to act around people... or she knows how to act but doesnt feel comfortable. she has never like being the center of attention and as such wishes to go unnoticed most of the time. people can be quite surprised by her sudden appearance in places when she says something... in fact most people forget she is there.
 
 history:
 "That building... NO, you do NOT want to go in there... keven was went in there 4 years ago... um, no, i didnt see him enter, but he was going to... he had been talking about it for weeks, how he would prove it wasnt haunted... no, never seen anything in there myself, but then you cant see ghosts... well, at night sometimes, you can hear someone sining a sorrowful song, or a violin playing a sad tune. well, its only ever soft...
 
 the ghost, no but bill swears he saw a girl leave there one time. he had sat up every night for a week waiting to see someone leave. says it was a girl, the one that got killed in a drive by right after being arrested for her friends murder... I think its stupid. why would she haunt that building, she was to young to have ever known it and i say she would be haunting the grave where she was buried, remember those cultists... the ones that where performing satanic rituals in the cemetery, burning the bodies of the dead... hers was one that was desiccated... i heard that they found  a silver neckless that she had been buried with in the fire!"
 
 Powers: Because she has spent her life (and unlife) not wanting to be noticed. humans generally dont, and can get quite scared when it suddenly clicks in there brains that she is standing in front of them speaking to them. even then they are likely to forget her. this effect is not powerful enough to work on older vampires, and only works partially on young ones.
 
 well CL. is that alright. or would you have me change something.
 
 and i have another question. Does a vampire have to be invited into a house, or can they enter uninvited?
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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #23 on: December 04, 2006, 02:02:00 AM »
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 persoanlly i find the ida of a vampire having to be invited itno a house romantic...hell i wont enter a house un-invited myself...                        

 

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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #24 on: December 04, 2006, 02:15:00 AM »
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 Sweet Stalin, that's a lot of text! I'll read it soon.
 I just have to get some needles in me first...
 
 If Miyo wants in, I want a bio too. And from anyone else with the slightest shred of interest. Wooh.                        

 

                                                  

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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #25 on: December 04, 2006, 02:20:00 AM »
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 i was trying to keep it short.                        

 

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« Reply #26 on: December 04, 2006, 03:44:00 AM »
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 I'm having problems reading the backstory. Would you split it up in paragraphs so that I and others can have an easier time reading it? I'm not sure I can fully comprehend what you're trying to tell me if you don't.
 
 One detail, though:
 Elizabeth can't go around killing random intruders like that.
 Antonio would be forced to pay her a quick and messy visit...                        

 

                                                  

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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #27 on: December 04, 2006, 03:56:00 AM »
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 sorry, open office is taking its time to compile and so i wrote it in vi. so the paragraphs where extra messy when i copied it for some reason.
 sorry for the way i wrote it, i was trying to keep the size down. (im not talking about paragraphs)
 
 
 tzimisce? well thats different.                        

 

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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #28 on: December 04, 2006, 05:41:00 PM »
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Crazy-Legs posted:

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 One detail, though:
 Elizabeth can't go around killing random intruders like that.
 Antonio would be forced to pay her a quick and messy visit...

 
 Emphasis on the quick, im nothing if not efficient...
 
 [added Dec  4 2006 12:59PM]
 
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 arith...some incontinutites...the council would've sent me after your sire, had he been marked...so maybe you would like ot edit that...im no elder afterall, and i dont consider 31 middle aged....i can picture it though...im sent to inform you that your sire had broken the laws in turning you, he maked but ou can be spared..yes...it could work...think about it.                        

 

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Re: Covering Tracks Discussion
« Reply #29 on: December 04, 2006, 08:52:00 PM »
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 i could do that, but then whould you look after elizabeth?
 
 1, im sure your not there only hitman
 2, i was thinking about some personal business between elders.
 3, its all part of the game. just because you want someone dead, doesnt mean that you will send the hitman, even if you are able and have reason. perhaps there was some other reason he did it.
 
 im not so concerned with you killing stuff, or staking speople and let me rip them to shreds... oh i was also going to ask cl if i could drink my sire dry... its more, hmm what happens to elizabeth? i think that if the councle had sent you the would have just had you kill me aswell. so yeah
 what do you think cl?                        

 

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