I just stumbled about a minor problem in Ash's dialog if you decide to lead him through the sewers with low humanity. In this case Ash doesn't ask if you are ready now, but the player replies assume he did. This concerns the replies to line 381. You should remove the "yes" and "no"s.
I found an inconsistency in the SinBin. The note for the strippers mentiones the password "sinner". But in the hackfile "sinner" is used for the peepshow lockdown, and "peeper" for the stripper's logfiles. Didn't these two originally use the same password?
But it doesn't make sense if we're playing as a Tremere and visit the apartment multiple times, because Max won't have any new dialogue and that's just annoying.
I would prefer that you only need to talk to him on the first visit to the finale to open the door, but on subsequent visits the door would be open.
I'm sorry, nothing happens to me from entering this command. There is another option?
The first time, having already chosen the ending, a unique dialogue occurs and the door opens. But when you revisit the door is closed and if you talk to him, he will say: "I will say no more" and the door opens again.
Although, if I choose the Max ending for the Ventrue, and after that I return to the apartment, but I cure it with a noclip and enter the chapel, will this be considered a test?